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Peer feedback:

Cinematography: Comments on standard and appropriacy of camera angles, movement and distance.
Good
*Lots of different shots; good shot variation
*Good shot variation and length-different shot types during singing together
*Split screens good
*Good establishing shots
Bad
*Mix it up at the end, gets a bit boring, shots too long.

Editing: comments on transition types, order and lip syncing.
Good
*Good use of split screens- makes it interesting
*Good standard of editing, always in sync with the tune.
Bad
*Could use different shots at the end
*Some of the shots were too long
*Too many fades

Mise-en-scene: comments on locations, costumes, props etc. Appropriate to genre?
Good
*Nice use of locations; makes you want to continue watching
Bad
*Change kiss at the end- awkward, boy looked nervous
*Piano doesn't fit with music
*Change the location from college
*No story, no middle; how did they actually meet?

Genre conventions: use of other genre conventions, What are they? Are they appropriate to the genre of music?
Good
*Typical 'love' story conventions
*Very focused on the two characters
*Like the hearts in location
Bad
*No chemistry