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Cinematography
*Well framed, but needs more close-ups of performer

Editing
*Piano dissolve at the beginning was effective
*More balance between performance and the story is needed
*Don't overuse shots

Mise en scene
*Appropriate to the genre
*Could do with more abstract or themed images to punctuate the other footage

Genre Convention
*Evidence of appropriate conventions
*Could use a usual motif or image to more symbolically represent the song

Whats missing?
*Needs more footage of the performer directly addressing the camera